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The phophesy of a City

Circled by a ring of stone,
as tall as earth, she stands alone.
One city.

She's weeping for a world, long gone,
and hiding from the star, that shone.
Still calling.

Waiting on the verge of doom,
she stands before a dark, that looms.
A peril.

Frozen, in a shadowed path,
there is nothing in the aftermath.
Alone.

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  • longlife
    September 15, 2008
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    great great great job! your awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    • longlife
      September 15, 2008
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      keep writing your poems are loveley!

      great great great job! your awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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