Above the clouds, 'neath higher things,
strain your ears for beating wings.
Circling lands where legions lie,
protecting in the navy sky.
I hide beneath the Fallen Star,
I linger, as an unhealed scar.
Seek me to restore your lands,
for your tired, weathered hands.
I hear your cries, I suffer to,
I want to start your land anew.
But only one can bear my weight,
when she comes, it is her fate.
Four will go, three will return,
in this, a lesson to be learned.
For one who has a selfish heart,
will feel my wrath right from the start.
I am love, and grief and pain,
but the darkness will not win again.
One will come, and find a way,
and seek the place, where now, I lay.
Author notes
This goes with something I am working on...thought Id put it in ap for some feedback...
Please be honest, don't be afraid to be critical, I'm all for improving my work:)
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great imagery, i think your a great writer and i love seeing aqll the great poems from you!!!!!!!!! Your so good at writing
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I thought this was wonderful Gabi
a great write
Hugs
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Who is this
Do you know me?? lol
thanks for the comment xoxo
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