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race with the lights off

...and it slowly seems i'm slipping
and losing what's left of me.
fighting this war of dreams and reality.

all that's left,
is what she guessed.
Her fingers shake,
when they touch her dress.

make any sense?

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  • FieryHollow
    March 21, 2008
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    Wow,this has so much hidden meaning, it doe make sense. I really liked this piece, good job.