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Our Sad Song

Savor the music!
It lingers slowly
close to your ears.
It helps plants grow
And lets us learn.
Yet listen well:
Our sad story
this song tells...

Author notes

The pattern was stolen from a poem i just read by William Blake. Thought that would be note-worthy.

I like it.

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  • crazymomma
    April 30

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    I'd love to know the poem that inspired this. I really like it. The saddness can be 'heard'. Thanks for sharing.