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"Tell me, what if?"

What if this is as good as it gets?
This life that sucks so much
These people that tear at you
This world that grates against you
This skin that should not be yours

What if, this is as good as it gets?
This hopelessness that seems to stay
This road that never deviates from this path
This strength that is a joke in itself.

Just please tell me, what if?
Then tell me, why?

A contest entry

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  • Patwak919
    March 22, 2008

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    Very nice job. I think that you used the prompt very nicely. Short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoyed it very much, and I wish you luck in the contest.