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Defining Fear

Split lips,
broken bones,
cracked ribs
and a warning.

Pain pills,
alcohol
forced sex.
Life.

Sexual deviancy
( at it's best )
memories of life spiraling.
( Sometimes it's best to keep
your mouth shut)
Will this ever stop?
( Too afraid to leave)
Will the next time this happens?
( I'm gonna die)

I walk a fine line
between being ok
and ready to jump...
I'm not sure about
my next move.
I'm a shadow
in the world.

Author notes

It's very simple and to the point. Sometimes the most hard hitting poems are simple.

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  • Darkend
    April 10, 2008

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    Ouch

    This poem is pain all wrapped up in words. You are rights about simple poems packing a punch. Well done, raw and emotional.


  • JustAnOrdinaryGirl
    March 21, 2008

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    Great

    Great write. I like it. Shows your pain and how you arent sure of the furture or even if there is one.