Happy Birthday
This girl so precious
to many near
gets the gifts
of another year.
They love you lots
they love you dear
they cant wait
to add another year.
They love this girl
so beautiful and young
she has the determination
and a drive to get it all done.
Go for a walk on this beautiful day,
pick up a petal to help you think,
let it inspire you to use that ink.
Author notes
sorry for going over 50 words but i figured i didn't go to much over
First to get an honorable mention.
A contest entry
- Flowers for her hair by tara wilson.
2250 points, ended April 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any good or delete?
Comments
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how very beautiful, this reminds me of my sister, her birthday is coming up soon
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a beautiful poem for a beautiful girl - thanks so much for joining our party for her!..
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This is real pretty and very sweet - just like Namita! The rhyming adds a singing quality to this poem and I almost wanted to sing "happy birthday" while reading here!
Thank you for writing this for Namita.
~ Nicolette
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it's wonderful
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It's alright! This is so lovely, I didn't even notice the word limit
Thank you so much for this pretty piece; such subtle and beautiful rhyming... thank you so much, Joe!
- namita
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