Take a Picture

Butchering hearts
[needed escapes]

expanding skies,
consuming souls.

Dwelling light
exposing beauty

spreading arms
uplifting perfection,

I dreamt God's envy.

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prompt ic: pic credit: http://www.deviantart.com/print/903492/
"Requiem of a Dream" by `isacg (deviantart.com)
20words.

~Quickie~ by PerfectImperfection. 675 points, ended March 20, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
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100 Short Prewrites by Kari. 450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
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Kari
March 31, 2008

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WOAH...now that was deep!!!! I loved it. Thank you very much for your entry and the best of luck
hoodoolover
March 21, 2008
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Very nice write, the last line is the clincher, congrats on the gold!
delightfulmess
March 20, 2008

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WOW!!!! GREAT TAKE.
Best of luck in the contest.

Delila
penman
March 20, 2008
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Excellent
Wonderfully expressed. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
MJ Donnelly
March 20, 2008
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You are so talented Stephanie, this is a wonderful heart's labor hun.
- luna-midnight
  March 20, 2008
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  aww thankies *hugs*
PerfectImperfection
March 20, 2008

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Wow. This is just a completely captivating write. Wonderful take on the image itself - but with an added vibrance. Truly poignant. Thank you for your entry!