Pipe dream poppies
tranquilize...
dissociation from
painful realization.
We don't recall waking
knowledge of
sweet innocence...
until it's already gone.
Author notes
photo prompt:http://www.deviantart.com/print/903492/
A contest entry
- ~Quickie~ by PerfectImperfection.
675 points, ended March 20, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A hectare is a metric acre, for want of a better way of explaining it.
A good, solid silver here.
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I thought it looked more like a wheat field to me, since that is all that is around here. I mean my closest neighbor is just a hectre away.lol. enuf of that, the poem is so true about how we view innocence, very well scripted. uh huh.
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yeah it probably is, that's what I have my poet's license for though, LOL what the heck is a hectre?
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A different but excellent take here.
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Very well Done I like your wording in this Good luck in the contest Deary Hope you do well
Cara
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Excellent write. Taking the image and just peeling back the layers until you could see... Nice imagery. Thank you for your entry!
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