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I Wonder



I wonder if you notice,
The frown lines in my laughs,
And I wonder if you see
The tears behind the glass.
I wonder if you notice,
How broken dolly is,
And I wonder if you know
That I was meant for his.
Do you see the trembles
Of my weak, dissobediant chin?
And I wonder if you see
The lie that is each grin

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 22, 2008

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    Great poem. It is hard to mask our true feelings, and so painful when someone we care about doesn't notice. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

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    whisper