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Quotidian

-Quotidian-

It's hard to fathom a soak'ed face,
brightened by a street light's trace.
Avoiding the alley, tight and dark;
where some, tinned like sardines, stood.
Your pale complexion paled;
to my flour-handed span.

Breaking and re-kneading you again,
the elasticity never the same between us.

And it's hard to fathom a spool of lace,
adorned beside a Hordocks place.
Florid in the woods that show no feet,
the beauty oozing obsolete;
and dressed in ornate pots on desks.
A trophy wife, of unmarried best.

Wither and die, the pot remains the same;
with circular halo still grasped in ones hand.

And it's strange,
the talk of the raven holds no meaning;
even as the last caw recedes,
and the Death Angel trumpets through.
To you, darkness on bough, your voice screaming;
with wild-sorrow, voiced what
my light-less eyes could not.

In the mirror pools of life,
reflections cast a dark wing'ed beast;
the herald of death, pecking dark fruit.

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By Treagal

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 22, 2008
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    Nice write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    i'm not really sure i understood this, to be honest
    it seems to hold a lot of meaning
    a little long but its a nice write
    good luck in my contest