The whole world is grey
Pick your shade.
sweet lovechild.
A contest entry
- what can you tell me by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 20, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
responce?
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If it scores with Lavender Butterfly
it scores with me. She is the mistress of the short form. She has an uncanny ability to write and judge this type of work. So kudos, for scoring here. 10 words is a tough limitation.
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I'm glad you like it
It was actually only 8 words when it was judged I added the last line just for the sake of adding to it, but I think it did improve it, if only slightly.
Thanks for stopping by
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hahaha, yay! you got a trophy, great job!
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hahaha, i like this, its an aweosme write, and has a little kick of spunk =) lol
aweosme
good luck
take care
stephanie =) -
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Oh...
Well thank you
I appreciate you taking the time to read and enjoy it
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lol. welcies =)
it was a pleasure to read =)
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