for tara
while twitters enter
your fragrant chambers
winter is rattling
at my bolted doors ...
it makes me stand in awe:
we are living
in the House
of
All Seasons
spring-
cleaning
now
and then
Author notes
PrompOption #2
"Spring shows what God can do with a drab and dirty world." ~Virgil A. Kraftt
In a list
A contest entry
- Beauty of Springtime ~ quotes Inspired by m2lost24get.
550 points, ended March 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol on the last stanza of spring cleaning as thats what i have been doing on my spring break and finding lost cat toys my 2 have managed to roll under the couches. Why is it that the beauty of snow befalls such wonder in its purest whiteness but sinks our soul when it is plowed and drabbed by filth and muck.? lol lol The comes Springtime to renew our faith in the outside world of natural wonder and bliss. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


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oh dear i must do some now,,i wish you hadn't brought it to my attention well done


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as the bright morning jumps into my eyes spring is leaping across the fields - i will give to you warmth as winter is waving hello too


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I just looked out the window and saw the first snowflakes of Spring! Only a wee flutter of snow, though, and there's blossom on the trees to compensate. Awfy cold though. I'll Spring clean later, I think.
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Here the sickening winter filth is still tormenting life even if spring is officially already here. I hope it will actually become manifest soon. Ack,
Chris


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thank you so much...
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"we are living
in the House
of
All Seasons"
this is a beautiful poem & so true..our Earth is a house of all seasons & Spring does clean it..love the personification..


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