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Spring-cleaning

for tara

while twitters enter
your fragrant chambers
winter is rattling
at my bolted doors ...

it makes me stand in awe:

we are living
in the House
of
All Seasons

spring-
cleaning
now
and then


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PrompOption #2
"Spring shows what God can do with a drab and dirty world." ~Virgil A. Kraftt

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  • m2lost24get
    March 21, 2008

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    lol on the last stanza of spring cleaning as thats what i have been doing on my spring break and finding lost cat toys my 2 have managed to roll under the couches. Why is it that the beauty of snow befalls such wonder in its purest whiteness but sinks our soul when it is plowed and drabbed by filth and muck.? lol lol The comes Springtime to renew our faith in the outside world of natural wonder and bliss. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    oh dear i must do some now,,i wish you hadn't brought it to my attention well done


  • individuality gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    as the bright morning jumps into my eyes spring is leaping across the fields - i will give to you warmth as winter is waving hello too


  • Keith
    March 21, 2008

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    I just looked out the window and saw the first snowflakes of Spring! Only a wee flutter of snow, though, and there's blossom on the trees to compensate. Awfy cold though. I'll Spring clean later, I think.


  • rite
    March 20, 2008

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    Here the sickening winter filth is still tormenting life even if spring is officially already here. I hope it will actually become manifest soon. Ack,

    Chris


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    thank you so much......


  • tara wilson gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    "we are living
    in the House
    of
    All Seasons"

    this is a beautiful poem & so true..our Earth is a house of all seasons & Spring does clean it..love the personification..

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