Everlasting loneliness
Never-ending despair
Eternal darkness
They’re all there
Inside my heart
I feel this pain
It isn’t fair
It drives me insane
I hate
I don’t know who
But the feeling is there
In all that I do
Life itself is pitiful
Hardly worth living
Because all we do is take
Take without giving
A contest entry
- The Hard Truth about Life by JustAnOrdinaryGirl.
300 points, ended April 22, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Oh hun.. Hugs to you.. I'm sorry that you feel this way.. I wish I could do something to help you..
But the emotion in this piece is soo good. You take us inside your pain and let us glimps it, if only for a little while.. Great write hun..
Peace to you, Jetleena
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But why? Why? Anyone can talk about pain. I want something from experince. Something that hurts. How can i feel the pain if i cant even tell if your connected to this?
I hate
I don’t know who
But the feeling is there
In all that I do
Why do you hate? Were you hurt? I need more....
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