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Love

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Love,
 

     the sweetest necessity

 

Corrupts,

 

          the damaged soul

 

[awaiting affection.]

 

 

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Yes...that's so so very true...I like those words at the end..very well done yet once again!


  • blue bard
    March 20, 2008
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    Way to maximize

    You sure made those 10 words say a lot.


    • luna-midnight gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      haha i tortured them and stretched them over a hot rock, you shoudl try it lol
      thanks ^_^


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 20, 2008
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    very well expressed.
    Good luck.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    Great 10 words.

    Nice take.

  • Amarige
    March 20, 2008
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    Awww very heartfelt..wonderful piece
    Ruby


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    March 20, 2008
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    Oh! sad, yet bitter-sweet

    well done

    Ken

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