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Kiss The Sky


Kiss
me love
mingle your breath
of passion
with mine




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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    This is such a lovely write. It has so much tenderness and although it is so short, it says so much. Well done for such a beautiful poem.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    awww this is soo beautiful, nice write and good luck in the contest!
    lovely wrute
    take care
    stephanie