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Life changes



Empathy beckoning   
          {Feelings awakened}

Vision clears
          {Realization dawns}
 
 

Life
  Changes...

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    wow i love the descriptive words that you have used here. its beautifully done and it speaks so much wel done bro


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    this is great, many wonderful descriptions here is something i'd do with it, if it were mine try to read it then, see if you can tellt he difference.

    Empathy beckons
    [feelings awakened]

    Vision clears
    [realization dawns]

    Life,
    chages.

    somethins like that and then mess with bold and italics, but thats me.
    wonderful write and good luck =)
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • twilight-Luvr
    March 20, 2008
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    i like it

    this was really good.


  • movedon
    March 20, 2008

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    Beautiful!!! Another wonder of a write love! The progressing words held my attention till the end!

    Always your angel,
    Miley


  • KayJay
    March 20, 2008
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    Darn! You're right (LOL). Good write.
    Ken


  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 20, 2008

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    Sigh...yes it does. I wonder if we ever get used to change...something to ponder I guess.

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