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Ten Words

My hate is strong
My love is stronger
This sucks.

A contest entry

Much love. xoxo

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  • U.g.l.y.
    March 30, 2008
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    Forgot them.

  • U.g.l.y.
    March 30, 2008

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    And this comment goes with honesty... this sounds pretty much like Intelligent Dance Music, I can't just wait to listen to those words with random beats and drumloops.


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Cute

    I have often been caught in this situation you have presented in this short poem. I can relate. ~Peace~Rev. Dragon Raven


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    awww its simple but it says so much in so few words. it is beautifully produced well done sweetie


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    hahahaha. this is a greta poem, gave me a chuckle, lol. great write and good luck in the contest!
    take care
    sephanie =)


  • KayJay
    March 20, 2008
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    The fact that love is stronger? Yeah, at times it does (LOL). Good write.
    Ken

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