Oh God
usually like an elementary baby
I am stuck up while conceiving you
that how you are devised
and how do you eyewitness ?
I am never responded
making me to contemplate the diagram
which you posses
yet, believing that you are made up of
the atoms of this nature
by the universal specialties of
the companionability
you synthesize by the core
to teach us the lessons of life
while serving as God
Oh God...
Author notes
Prompt
THE best preacher is heart
The best teacher is the time
The best book is nature
The best friend is GOD"
-------------------TALMUD
A contest entry
- FOUR BESTS by Purush.
450 points, ended April 3, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Don't Wing A Prayer by Carly Pop.
1000 points, ended May 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Profound!
Who we are and what our place is in God's universe
is always on my mind...this addresses that question in my mind's eye. Jane
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excellent
very unique line of thought and choice of words which reflect a unique personality. no one could deny that this is an excellent attempt. best reagrds and congrats!
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Very interesting write.I have to agree with the host, when he says.."different concept with deep thoughts"I wish you all the best in the contest.
Take care and many blessings to you.
~Angel~
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very good poem with some very interesting points
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