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rise mister esteedeizes




cat pissed stained floors
can't shake this hollow
and i have fallen
into something
hard to get out
muddy quicksand seep thru my
thoughts on the floor
absorbed by burned lyrics & guitar chords

i was unaware as the fingers came
against the strands and yanked
me
as i stood unaware
as i stood
unaware
expecting the eye of god
and came to with what i
should have expected to
find

cra cra cra crazy
with the
nogoods


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  • JerryO1
    April 3, 2008
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    The verdict is still out

    This hits me at first as a cra cra crazy little poem, but then after reading it a few times I realize there is something ominous here, some deeper issues bubbling and festering - or am i over analyzing now? I catch a hint of guilt, regret and cynisim...hmm...maybe I'm wrong.