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My Mommy and Daddy Are Mr and Mrs Showtime...

Mr and Mrs showtime

Oh pwease sing us a song

Come show me what you got

Put on a pway nice and long

 

Come on, you should be used to this by now

You do it everyday

Mr and Mrs showtime

Oh, pwease come out to pway

 

I wanna watch you put on that act

The one where we are never sad

I don’t like this now

And I hate it when you are mad

 

I want mr and mrs showtime back

You left them back at the set

I don’t like when your mommy and daddy

Mr and Mrs showtime never get upset!

 

You’re the perfect mommy

When I go out wit you and your friends

You kiss me and you hug me

But Mrs showtime likes to pretend

 

Cause if the news people talks to you

And you are being mean to me

It will be all over the papers

And that’s the last thing that you want to see

 

And I know that daddy really loves me

Because at work he told them that he did

“im his wittle princess” he told the camera

But Mr showtime really only kids

 

Cause lat night daddy told me

That he wished that I was dead

Mr showtime would have never said that

He woulda have hit daddy in the head

 

So Mr and Mrs showtime

Pwease put on a play

Treat me like you wittle girl again

Treat me like you did earlier today.

 

 

       ~Your wittle princess

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the spelling and grammer mistakes were intentional...
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  • Damaged-Soul
    January 9
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    Very powerful--i had to read it a second time!


  • Damaged-Soul
    March 23, 2008
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    this made me cry....and i've had a freind go through this before...very very sad!...love it though!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 22, 2008
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    Very powerful message. I have my suspicions about those celebs, but you never know. They may be the best parents because they can have a nanny do all the dirty work. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • Kia Tenshi
    March 21, 2008

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    I love poems that give someone a slap in the face about child abuse...And yours did just that beautifully!
    Very nice<3

  • curiousblonde
    March 20, 2008
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    oooppps

  • curiousblonde
    March 20, 2008

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    YAY!

    Lumin, THIS IS AWESOME... its great, very sad but so true. you made this so clear.

    I LOVER YOU SIS!!!

    ~KC

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