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You made me a natural disaster


heat in roaring with madness
tears of lava sliding down my face
cold water wont make it any less
rage is developed from my base

my tears rain falling
too bad it was an acid rain
made me compete in killing
just to abstain my pain

my sigh was a tornado
filled with anger and rage
don't have a destination to go
just unwinding for leaving me in cage

waves from sea bashing into the table
fighting for the right
thinking i am incapable ?
think i can't do this over a night ?

I drag every one around me

don't care if it is straight to hell

this is a repay for what you made me be

now that is for watching me fell


Patience abruptly start falling
till snow covers it all
no sympathy for whom ever calling
they all shall fall

They made me an earthquake
shiver with grudges
all poisoned by snake
till my final words come out with nudges

too bad if you suffer through this
its you who made me cry
its you who filled my heart with cruelness
now its time for me to come-out so you can die

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  • allaboutyou
    April 22

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    oh great emotion

    I like this very much, I feel like i can sense the emotion in your poem. Well you have an awesome day, peace be with you!
  • wow so much anger and strong feelings i like it u describe exactly how most of us feel sometimes.
  • i love this!!
  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    The anger from within screams loud and clear in this painful poem, great flow and rhyme


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    Stay safe
    ~Manda