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Rediscover

The
Beauty beyond reach,
Yet extends fragrances and light.
Calling me to her place never the less, prepared Miraculously;
For intimate unfathomable
Love
Where the bounty, of the infinite,
Limitless, expressions of love can take place,
In majestic and awesome disclosure.
I,
I am
New born,
Resuscitated in
Purest clean Light!
And never wanting such
Blessedness to be ever over.
We
While, new light-being-breathed
Direct from its very source,
Each breath is returning
From where it came.

All is perfection
Yet still home,
And such, in
No ways
foreign,
But
...
Rediscovered
In that we've
always
been.

Author notes

Directly inspired by Rediscover's poem 'Thoughts-of-Soloman', Which I was honoured to have so generously dedicated to me.

This poem was born simply by my endeavouring need, to 'comment', on her exquisite 'pearl', which no less than sent me into flight! I hope these words express some of it, my appreciation, adequately.

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  • Lucy.
    March 28, 2008
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    Beautiful, the last two verses especially, so true.

  • wellbegone
    March 28, 2008
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    Makes my heart pound

    Just revisiting this beautiful place where I can breathe in all your beautiful words.

  • Bob Fox
    March 23, 2008

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    Wonderful

    A display of love worded so wondefully. To rediscover each again and carry that love to a higher level. A dream for many but reality in this fine piece. Amen


    • Thoughts-of-Soloman
      March 24, 2008
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      Can't say how glad I am, that you have vision to see that in the poem, Bob. Bless you for that.

  • wellbegone
    March 21, 2008

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    Greatly Appreciated

    You words flow across the page so tenderly.
    Speaking out so compassionately, words of truth stand before me. I read in awe, where have you come from? Sharing with me this majestic and awesome disclosures.
    This is touching, you are so talented. I thank you graciously.


    • Thoughts-of-Soloman
      March 21, 2008
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      We simply bring them about together

      ..., these disclosures. For which, I, am extremely grateful.

  • wellbegone
    March 20, 2008
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    Awestruck

    I need time to quit shaking....I'll reply soon.

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