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Pain lies in the past
Memories that will not lie
Spring heals all our hearts

A contest entry

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  • passionate-poet
    April 11, 2008

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    a very pretty poem very sad but sweet still with a new start alot said in such little words
    thank you for sharing


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    You have crafted a lovely poem. It seems to favor a Senryu rather than a haiku, same form but less nature based and more linked to emotions. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem. Your entry to this contest is appreciated.

    Dennis


  • vampira1665 silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    I can think of some reasons for this piece. I am sure I am way off, but since we have a certain something/someone in common it made me think. Knowing you tho, I know it means many things.

    Nicely done,
    Vampi