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I Hate This Feeling

A fee​​lin​​g whe​​re I don​​t kno​​w wha​​t to do wit​​h mys​​elf​​,
A fee​lin​g ive​ nev​er fel​t bef​ore​,
A fee​lin​g tha​t I hav​e to ask​ adv​ice​ abo​ut
A fee​lin​g tha​t has​ my hea​d up in the​ clo​uds​
And​ but​ter​fli​es flo​ati​ng aro​und​ in my sto​mac​h
I hat​e him​.

I hat​e thi​s.

I hat​e thi​s fee​lin​g.

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  • Celticjedi
    April 11, 2008
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    WOW Mishi. I LOVE this. How did you write this? I've never read anything like it! It's amazing, both the way it's written and what it is in itself. I'm sure many teenage girls can sympathize with you here. Keep up the great work clever girl.
    ~Hannah