Well there I was officer driving down the road,
when out popped the great big ugly toad.
It looked at me and just stopped dead,
you should have seen the thing, bulging blue and red.
It just squatted there like a stone,
or a king sat upon his throne.
He had me cold, I could not swerve,
and there I was coming around the curve.
The misses here, she grabbed the brake,
and in a moment I was wide awake,
and as we crashed down this here cliff,
I looked back to wonder what if?
There he was jumping down the road,
that blue and red, car crashing, toad.
Author notes
lol...what a great photo.....
fallen Comrade...aka Ash Friday...aka Simon Corn
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lol, that is great. But if I was driving, that toad would be stuck in my tread. Great flow, such a cute story. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
p.s. great title -
Thank you four oops!
I really like this. It made me laugh. It's my story and I am sticking to it. Great tongue in cheek write. -
... and I laugh!
I am amazed at what havoc Gods creatures can reek... Quiet humorous really... Them in their true innocence... Us in our fancy brilliance... Go figure...
Very well written poem too... I love the imagery...
~ James ~
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Haha! Omg, this is so creative. I absolutely love it!
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hehe this is such a funny write bro but it works well with the picture. such imagination you have penned here
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hahahahah. funny. nice write, a pleasure to read. great job and good luck
take care
stephanie =)
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