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Sway

Missing image
Balancing
  the moment
upon the quiet song of life

this breath
  takes her softly
to a place she longs to be

just to sway
  on the surface
of freedom...

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  • Dark Otter
    March 22, 2008

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    feminine nature of poetic form

    I feel I'm always on the outside looking in. Can't conceive it. Can't imitate it. Can read it. Is there hope for Neanderthal males. Can we break though to that side? Isis veil parts to show the duckling has turned into a swan. Nature's moment stilled and captured. Thanks.


  • dustookie2
    March 21, 2008

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    Wow Congratulations on the silver...just such a bautiful write delicate, graceful and full of imagery. Very nice take on the prompt.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    Just stunnning. Very beautiful imagery in this.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    So beautiful.. like a soft whisper this is... perfect for the picture.
    Stunning as always!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 20, 2008

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    the way that you have cauht the natural fatures is so beautiful with imagery. i love it well done mummy

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