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Swan

They’ve ran over them with jet-skis
What an undignified way to die
My friends and family
Now all gone
But I’m still here
Daring you to take your best shot
Because I WILL survive

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    An excellent write! Very though provoking. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • k8fairy
    March 20, 2008

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    I know I shouldn't find that funny, but I am clearly just a horrible person. Oh swans getting run over by jet skis, it is probably my hatred of swans. Sorry.


    • DrunkenMonkey
      March 21, 2008
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      true story, these drunk idots ran over a swan last summer on my lake


  • DrunkenMonkey
    March 20, 2008
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    there is no longer version, dont know why it says that -sorry