My Gaggle is gone!
They flew away home;
Left me with wet wings,
All on my own.
Damn them all-
Soon I'll fly;
Just wait until
My feathers are dry!
Author notes
Picture inspried. And for those of you who don't know, a 'gaggle' is the name for a group of geese.
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired/30 words or less by AliceinPoetryLand.
600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That was cute and nicely written. It flowed well. I like short cute poems like that. Straight and to the point. Well done.
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LOL!
Cute little write here. I like how you were talking about geese compared to other birds but what really made this quite a stunning write was your excellent depth and words that really complete the pic. any ways a very well penned poem and keep up the very good work
very good luck to you!
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Thank you so much for your lovely entry Very original.
Gaylene
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