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Still See You (Short Version)

I rip apart my chest
Thrust my hands into the gap
And pull out my soul
Steal a glance inside
Then hurl it down on the concrete floor
Because through the frosted glass
I still see your face

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  • Godslayer
    March 31, 2008

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    i think that this is a great write keep it up and don't let others keep u from writting the way u want


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 20, 2008

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    This is ever so sad... I am sorry if it's based on actual feelings you have, though I can relate I've had this done to me several times...


  • DrunkenMonkey
    March 20, 2008
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    please see full version. click on my page to get to it