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My Salute To the Blue Birds

Why can't we fly where blue birds do so?
We have not earned our wings, that is why we sit so low.
I heard being a blue bird isn't all it's cracked up to be,
you realize they over look and much more they see.
To be up high and see all the wonders of the world both nice and tragic,
they think it's sad that people no longer believe in the magic.
Oh the blue birds see it all,
they see us at our best and see us fall.
They see children praying out the window upon night
others, older pray out of fright.
They see that karma holds no place,
that creatures are taught to embrace.
The bule birds have the freedom yet are bound by thier knowledge,
they hurt for the world, and see our souls on the edge.
This is my salute to them and all they know.
I quote from pink floyd "And all you touch and all you see
Is all your life will ever be"



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  • forgottENtragEdy
    April 25, 2008
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    wow i freakinnn love u!!! i love ur poetry its amazing<3