I rip apart my chest
Thrust my hands inside
Pull out my soul
And steal a glance inside
Before hurling it down on the concrete floor!
Because through the frosted glass
I still see your face
No matter how hard I try
I still see your fucking face!
I used to yearn to see you every day
Miss you before you’d even left
But I fucked that all up
Told you I hated you
When what I meant was
I love,
But I don’t want to hurt you
So I rip apart my chest
Thrust my hands inside
Pull out my soul
And I steal a glance inside
Before hurling it down on the concrete floor!
Because through the frosted glass
I still see your face
No matter how hard I try
I still see your fucking face!
Now I want you back
Need you back
Have to see your cold blue eyes
Feel your soft smooth lips
Hear your words
Making everything ok
Because I’ve ripped apart my chest
Thrust my hands inside
Pulled out my soul
Stolen a glance
And hurled it down on the concrete floor!
Because through the frosted glass
I saw your face
No matter how hard I tried
I still saw your fucking face!
But I can’t tell you
Can’t ask you
Because you’ve got the perfect guy
He treats you right
Loves you and cares for you
Never hits
Never screams
Never bitches
But still
When I ripped apart my chest
Thrust my hands inside
Pulled out my soul
And I stole a glance
I hurled it down on the concrete floor
Because through the frosted glass
I saw your face
No matter how hard I try
I still see your fucking face!
I guess all I really have to say is
When I ripped apart my chest
Thrust my hands inside
Pulled out my soul
And stole a glance
I hurled it down on the concrete floor
Because through the frosted glass
I saw your face
No matter how hard I try
I still see your fucking face!
I still see your fucking face!
I still see your fucking face!
Author notes
more lyrics then poetry, but what do you think. and if your in a band that want the lyrics, go ahead and take them
A contest entry
- Dark Passions by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended April 8, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I don't know much about lyrics so from that standpoint I can't say, but I could see it put to some heavy metal music and think it would sound pretty good. Only one suggestion in line 15 you might want to add "you" to the I love so that it flowed evenly. Thanks for entering
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anybody got any suggestions for the use of inside in both lines two and four?


