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Who Rakes the Leaves?

In the forest who
rakes the leaves ask we?
New life grows Jesus too!

A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 5

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    I agree

    this one all I can think of is Jesus gave us the world , now we take it as it is and accept it
    thank you for this entry...good luck
    mm


  • honey bear
    January 29

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    an interesting thought provoking short write that leaves a little puzzle for the reader, thnak you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Interesting question you pose in this poem, the third line is a bit of a puzzler, I will have to ponder this one some more. Thanks for entering this Celebration of Spring.

    Dennis