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Haiku - Spring


coloured gifts still wrapped
waiting for the right moment
to amaze the world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

prompt: beginning of Spring

In a list

A contest entry

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  • maralisa silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    beautiful background


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 31, 2008

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    So soft and beautiful. This is really amazing. I am very impressed! Wonderful work


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Nice comparision to the glories of Spring to unopened presents for us to enjoy. Enjoyed the pleasing background also. Thanks for entering this celebration of Spring.

    Dennis