A tear fell from my eye
like a single rose petal
dropping to the ground
the wind took it away…
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The picture above.
The Tear 2 [deviantart]
A contest entry
- 15/30/1 x Quickie x by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 20, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Great take on the picture. Soft write, I really like it. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Simple but well written. I dropped a tear too, I've dropped many recently, but tears must be shed to see anything clearly.
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