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Pieces and Ashes

Sharp claws
Tear me to bits
Ferociously
There's no end
To this hell
Each slash
Breaks my will
Breaks my soul

Little flames
Slowly burning
Every piece
That's left
It's eating at
Me physically
Me psychologically

Now I'm just
Little pieces
Burnt ashes
And no one cares
The wind blows
Hard and fast
And I'm just
Swept away
Into nothingness

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ARG.

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  • Melodies
    July 16, 2008

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    PIXIE TAG!!

    I am here to visit your poem and touch it with my love and say "Hello from the Enchanted Realm!" I am delighted to meet you and now it is YOUR turn to visit another poet from the Realm and Pixie Tag that person's poetry. Please?


  • J-Lee18m
    April 8, 2008

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    Sounds like something I'd write, That's never a good sign sis. but it's a great piece and I love it.