Windows show so many things
looking through yours I see me.
Even when torrential rains beat down,
I’m so fitted I won’t break free.
Even through your tears, we remain.
Author notes
30 WORDS OR LESS
prompts: B.
I hate you, because everytime I see you, I see a little piece of me still lodged in your heart. - Me
and picture
A contest entry
- 15/30/1 x Quickie x by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 20, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellently written in so few words baby, very powerful imagery here. Love you...Scott
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Wow,
Powerful woman, you got skills V~
You went deep with this one, way to go on silver.
Much love to you, always, Timothy
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This carries a lot of weight. It deepens the longer I sit with it. Beautifully done.
Love, Tom B.
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this read is deep, can mean so many things, was this meant to feel so sad yet strong and rising
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Excellent piece, it's so you. Well Done.
(that was the 30 character review)
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This is so sad. Beautiful, but sad... It tears somewhere inside me and I can't understand why, maybe it's the words I never had the strength to utter?
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I know the feeling took me this long to understand it myself.
s
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wow mommy this is so beautifully written with alot of strength in each word.i realy missed reading your stuff
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