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I Am Anonymous

I am anonymous
You cannot see me who I am
I am anonymous
I am invisible to you

I am a dove
Trying to spread peace
I am a dove
Hatred is what I love the least

I am a vast sea
Unpredictable at heart and mind
I am a vast sea
My bad actions cause storms

I am a child
A smiling face with eyes so bright
I am a child
And my dreams make me fly

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  • Metaphorist
    March 26, 2008

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    This is a nice poem. I don’t know about the last stanza though. It feels out of place as the rest of the poem includes more negative perceptions of you. Either way, thanks for entering.