Be blessed, my child
happy, content and worry free
one day i'll see you again in eternity
be comforted in knowing my race i've run
your's has only just begun
tarry not long in mourning for me
for again each other, we shall see
until that time don't forget
i've never lied to you as of yet
hold to OUR FATHER'S hand good and tight
our reunion will be if you continue THE FIGHT!!
Author notes
"Allpoetry"
3/20/08 playing with thoughts and words!!!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice
well written and full of hope for a bright future in heaven wondderful job
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This poem was very inispiraing even in a sad sort of way, maybe because it was true. Children are a bless from God and if we can only look deep and exam them carefully we'd learn so much from them, we are mistaken when we think that we should teach them how to live it is them who should teach us. Thier innocence, pureness, kindness, clean natures and clarity. It is we who turn them to what we don't want them to turn up like, still we think in our own crazy way that we are making them better people by teaching them to lie, hide, hurt and sin and if we could have only let them be they'd have grown up to be angels. Pity that as the world develop we get even harsher towards each other, maybe this is a sign for our near end.
God bless you for such wonderful, touching poem it made my day... Thank you!
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Yes it is very true we must run this race like we've lost our minds just to see the Lord. This is where we pick up our cross and follow him. This poem rings truth and is very uplifting to the point of tears because I know we all have to be tired and ready to go on with the Lord. The bible said that in the last days the saints of God would look up to the heavens and cry out COME LORD JESUS! and I do believe we are at that point. We are in an election with nobody to vote for because we cant trust the candidates. We are in a war and if we pull out we know theyll send nuclear bombs over here. The crime rate might as well be at 100% and the way children are dying is ridiculous. The scriptures are being fulfilled daily; mothers against daughters, sons against fathers, the love of many shall wax cold. Gas prices are utterly ridiculous; almost $4 a gallon. Though even while painting such a gruesome picture of this world i know that this is not my home; ive gotta home in the sky. And i know that weeping may endureth for a night but joy cometh in the morning. I have a God named Jesus Christ whos love for me shatters the world around because for my sake he will come as a lion breaking forth in the clouds to fight for me. So while this world continues to fall apart Im just preparing for the Lord to come.
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