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What is this?

I look in the mirror
I don't like what I see
I want to break the person
Looking back at me

I throw a veil over the thing
But the image still burns in my brain
The girl in the picture
She just looks so slain

Her eyes droopy and skin pale
Looking so tired and fraile
The sadness emitting from her
Seems so unreal

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  • Olivias Violin
    March 20, 2008
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    I've been hearing lately how exercise is so good for depression. I have begun to walk a lot more in the past week on the advice from my doctor. Maybe this would help you.

    Be well.

    Karen