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forsythia buds

forsythia buds
prone to burst in yellow bloom
a robin's bobbing

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A contest entry

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  • crazymomma
    June 26, 2008

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    This was wonderful! The imagery really did paint a picture in my head. I think I may have sneezed at the tree pollen in my head LOL! Great poem!


  • FifthDove
    June 26, 2008

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    Hey there Bill, I see you are still great at writing these short pieces of gold drops. The imagery is fantastic to say the least. Thank you for the entry and best wishes in the contest


  • marlene47 silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    It's from the old song:
    When the red, red robin comes bob, bob bobbin' along, along,
    There'll be no more sobbing when he starts throbbing
    His own sweet song.
    I like it. Buds ready to burst and a singing robin. And it made me want to sing!
    Marlene


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008
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    You have used lovely Spring images in this poem. I don't quite understand line three:

    a robin's bobbikg

    Thank you for your entry in this Spring Celebration contest.

    Dennis

  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    You have used lovely Spring images in this poem. I don't quite understand line three:

    a robin's bobbikg

    Thank you for your entry in this Spring Celebration contest.

    Dennis

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