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The way it should be

notes flowing just like a river.
flawlessly through the ears of all.
Changes unnoticable for everyone so seduced by the music.
Listening carefully and intently  as it should be.
beautiful as the morning dew on the petals of a rose.
  So sweet , the envy of the birds.
You cannot compare anythign to this music that is in the air.
a way to escape the world.
If only for a little bit.
A way to forget all but the music in front of you.
A way to enjoy life just a little more.
That is what musinc is about

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Notsotorturedartist

A contest entry

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 22, 2008

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    Music is such an important part of life. I really like this alot. You do have a couple of typos. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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