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Beneath the Breeze, It is My Heart.

And through the clouds and gentle fields
of quiet springs and earth and light, it
sprinkles here upon these shores and
lingers on with her tonight;

For as she seeks the tide, by way of moon,
it nestles upon her breast. She turns,
it trails, beneath her sea, of amber
waves and Turquine dress; These beads

of light which bud from yew, dappled by
the wheat and dew, where her hands
And eyes yet remain.  So she cradles
Them as they drift along, forgotten

and wild but remembered by her. 
And as the sun dawns from the sky,
blossoms from the stars of night,
So she turns away her mind

From those distant fields of grain.  Her eyes
Sated, falter, as she hears afar the
sea. Another day upon these waves and
quiet shores of Sicily.
 

Author notes

For a friend, in a moment, wandering through the fields of grain as the dawn comes up, as she searches for home.

Just hoping to capture an image.

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  • Tmavi Princezn
    March 22, 2008
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    Me love this poem! i like ur style.


  • Duchess Dizufish
    March 21, 2008

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    amazing.

    at the moment, i'm talking to you on Messenger, telling you how much i love this poem.

    i won't repeat myself, but will instead remind you of our conversation with this comment. :]


  • DustinsGirl11508
    March 20, 2008
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    This is amazing!


  • Sofia Nadia
    March 20, 2008
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    im proud.


  • Mrs. Mautino
    March 20, 2008

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    You honestly NEED to give yourself more credit. I demand you to XD And you better win, or I shall be angry with someone


  • islekine
    March 20, 2008
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    You've captured it well.

    Thanks for your wonderful entry!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*

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