As I lay down here thinking of you,
happiness started to fill my soul.
After I thought the good part of me is gone.
You came along and found the key to my heart..
Your unique and special ways amaze me,
more than a thought of looking at sun down..
Or watching the moon getting full..
Your ability to cheer me up.
Your big hands whose caress I crave,
for my face to be held in their tenderness.
A vision of true desires, sacred love..
I longed for endlessly..
I cherish with you all the wonders of life
for all the love we share..
All those beautiful drawing on the sky
or in the ground won't have meaning if
we are apart..
But once we will be together..
The moon will be called the sun of our longing nights..
The sand will be just a golden blanket on which
our true Love will find no other way..
A contest entry
- An In-Depth Look Into Relationships by Theactoffailing.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Extremely romantic. I love the beautiful metaphors, even though I didn't quite understand what the sun, moon and ground were supposed to represent, however, the sand was a brilliant ending. I'm a sucker for beach love. You really emcompassed the universe in this piece, it had an epic feel to it. In all, it was really good and very captivating. (I know this is kind of weird, but I'm completely intrigued to know what "All those beautiful drawing on the sky or in the ground" are, so if you could tell me I'd appreciate it.)
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Very sweet and Romantic. With Love all things are possible well God too hehe Good luck with this. Cara
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SO TENDER AND BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
One cherishes so much that special love between two who share everything with each other.
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