Uneasy in the unknown depths-
her heart's umpire was undressed
by the unison of unlike matters.
The umpire to undergo
into the ultimate copy of the uncanny,
the great opposite of Uranus: the undertaker.
Did they:
have to uncover the upheaval?
have to uplift the ugly side?
have to make its misery- unfortunate?
They, the unanimous, just had to unify
the underlined threads of the Universe's beyond
for the sake to upset her heart . . .
. . . was all lost in the uppermost paradise
that had crashed down into the
unconditional, uncouth Underground of her heart?
Such understanding was replaced by underestimation
when the world was unaware when she felt unwanted;
thinking she was unaffected by the unkind words
that were sharpened to unfasten her heart's pain.
Now, all was undecided since to undo the impossible
was unlikely a unique Utopia's path of righteous.
Why was the world urgent at the late time of the unbecoming?
Author notes
AP name: PatheticKt
Using the words that start with the letter 'U' often
was difficult so sorry if this piece seems a bit boring.
Although, to me, I think it looks fine at its own and whatnot.
Anyway, just remembered what my mom told me yesterday
about this Cyber Bully thing.
So thought of using that as somewhat an inspiration
to this theme ^^
oh well, helpful critiques are welcome
since i know this poem seems uh, kind of weird.
and yeah, comments are appreciated, too! ^^
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Comments
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Wow...what an interesting prompt. How many "U" words could there possibly be that would fit into a decent poem? You did well, considering.
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Nice
Great job on this piece and good luck in the contest
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But a maximum of 5.
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Oh, sorry . . .
Um, shall I edit the piece to make most of words start with the letter you assigned me to use or leave it alone?
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Its okay if you leave it. I told some other people with really awkward letters that they could leave some words that don't begin with the letter in,
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You are u. (Well obviously
)
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lol
ohh, the letter 'U' will be quite hard but I'll try my best 
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