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Embracing spring

cuckoo melodies
whispery death of winter
I wear my new shoes

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  • marlene47 silver member
    March 25, 2008
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    I like this - bird song, a breeze and new shoes! Sounds like spring is here.
    Marlene


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    This haiku is written from an interesting perspective. We celebrate the reclothing of spring in its' colorful wardrobe, but we also are affected by the change of this season and it is witnessed by our own change of wardrobe, shoes ect. Thanks for entering this contest.

    Dennis