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Our Journey Through Life

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The light shines through the window
As the day begins to awaken
Another step forward
On this journey through life

A path has been chosen
Lessons to be learned
Death is immanent
On this journey through life

Make the right choices
Love with all your heart
Bring peace within your world
On this journey through life

~Tisha Rene~

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Just came out, took all of about 3 minutes. Bridget liked it so I posted it.

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  • bird-mad girl
    March 21, 2008
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    First off, I'm totally digging the picture. It's beautiful!!!

    Anyway, the poem! I really love the language in this piece. It just adds to the peaceful beauty of the message. It's a simple message that's been told over and over again, but it feels like a new golden infant wrapped in your words.

    I love you with all my heart
    forever and ever!
    <3333


  • goddesskevauna
    March 21, 2008

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    Oh how wonderful, sis! That is just beautiful! Most importantly "love with all your heart"! It's not love if you don't.