Your fingers are playing with the stitches on my heart,
Coming even looser, you made it fall apart.
There are reasons I avoid you at school, in the hall,
After it was over you’d flirt but never call…
Your face and all we had; I still try to forget,
The guilt and pain you brought, piled in regret.
I feel this strong connection when you are around,
I know you feel it too, but we both don’t make a sound.
I’m lost in confusion, and how we both really feel,
I don’t want flirting anymore, I want something that is real!
You’re scaring me the way you finally want to speak.
You’re playing with my heart, but what is it you seek?
I’m uncomfortable with all the teasing that you bring
I want you to back off, I’m barely hanging by a string.
But I don’t want to let go
Though my love is sure to grow
Though I know where we’ve been
I thinking I’m falling for you again….
~Madison~
Author notes
Yes, it is about you, Aaron!
Please tell me what you think- I put stars next to places I'd like suggestions... see my notes please
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wow the emotion is so raw and it speeks to me, i can relate to this, it may be difficult at first but we just have to try to over come this, i still havent, best of luck to you and keep up the wonderful writes
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Awesome write, i know Exactly how ya feel there
Awesome job! xxx
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Stop playing with her heart, Aaron!
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lol thanks for the comment an applauds. =)
~Madi~
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this was such an amazing write. i could feel all the emotion. its hard i've been there before. this was amazing, great job!!!
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just because it's short doesn't mean that it can't convey an emotion well, and that's exactly what you did. i felt a personal connection with it, because i have been there. great write!
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thanks so much. yes its personal.
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Thank you very much for the comment. It certainly means alot. Ya, actually if you look at it, or when i read it it seems kinda long, tho it looks kinda short... maybe thats just me anywyay thanks, im glad i conveyed the emotion well. that would be my best bet for what most poems are for. lol im glad it was clear. thanks!
and this isn't fiction, in case you thought it was... lol
=)
~Madi~
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