Hospitals –
not a nice place to be
especially operations too,
but I know
there are angels
that will take care of you.
At your side
they will always be
taking turns to help you heal,
sent by God
with a mission
to little one’s like you.
I guess I know
what you’re going through
as my little daughter
once had the same as you,
and now she’s healed -
I know you too will be.
So, get better
dear little friend
this prayer is just for you,
and before you know
at school you’ll be
learning your ABC’s.
Author notes
Frans Bezuidenhout [aka fransb]
"I, Frans Bezuidenhout, hereby allow Mackerth to use my poem for the intended purpose".
In a list
A contest entry
- Sick Young Boy Needs a Poem! by mackereth.
2500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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First of all i would like to thank you for entering my contest. Just by doing so, you are giving hope to everyone that this has affected. Wow, great poem. The flow was nice and your personal experience with this was really evident in how you worded this.Thanks again for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Awe Fran,
you have written a touching prayer, i loved this. You write from the heart and exspirence by the sound of it.
I really love how you ended, very cute.
Good luck
Dolores
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