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My Northern Star

I gaze into your eyes and know you really care.
That, for me, you’ll always be there.
To wipe away my tears
And wash away my fears.
To kiss my wounds when I feel sad,
To hold me close when I feel mad,
And to cry with me when past haunting awake.
To always be true and never be fake.
To make me feel like I truly belong.
To make me always want to sing a song
About something so beautiful, it makes me smile,
Something that makes life completely worthwhile.
Something to guide me from going astray,
Something to always point me the right way.
Something to always give me protection
And point me the right direction.
Something that seems so out of reach, but really isn’t that far,
I’m singing about you, my northern star.

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Jack22 and option #1

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 4, 2008

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    This is so sweet. I absolutly love this poem in every way. Great rhyming as well. Congrats on the HM in the contest as well.

  • jbbrandi
    March 22, 2008

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    OOH!! I like this one! I like how you call your love your northern star...it gives it a special little something. Good job, good luck in the contest(s), and thanks for entering!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    This is a lovely piece. I had asked in the contest to please list if your name and if your a member so I can verify all that enter. Please add your name to the author notes and the option number.
    Thank you so much for a beautiful entry.

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